Kristine has to submit an essay each week on any subject she chooses. Grace and I are trying hard to get Kristine to be more expressive and not being inhibitive by correct spelling or writing. Slowly I am seeing improvements.
Her essay is reproduced below. words in parathesis are mine for easier reading and comprehension.
2009年3月28日
今天，我去吃“hui zhuan sushi”。我 zheng (正)在吃土豆泥的时后（候），我看见了‘Shen Yue Jun‘ (一位男同学)了！吃完了，我去yi yuan(医院)去yan(验)血。我的雪（血--白血球,常规4.0-10.0）是8。5。周二来的时候我妈妈和爸爸jie(接)到yi yuan(医院)，na(那)时候我的du（肚）子很tong(痛)很tong(痛)！还有呢我的血是16。5。 妈妈说：“你有wen (问)题”。
还有呢，周二来的时后，我得打点滴，应为我的血是16。5！！！
打的时候，我看见有一些打头(点滴)呢！
Today I went to eat 'Hui Zhuan Sushi'. When I was eating mash petato, I saw Xaivia (Xavier)! When we finish eating, we went to the hospital to blood test. My blood was 8.5 (white blood cell count, normal range 4.0-10.0). On Tuesday, Mummy and Daddy picked up me from school to the hospital, that time my tummy very very painful! and my blood was 16.5! Mummy says:"There is something wrong".
And on Tuesday, they gave medison through a drip, because my blood was 16.5!!! When doing that, I saw some do it on their heads!
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